Title: Kidnapped the Wrong Sister
Author: Marie Kelly
Genre: Erotica
Book Size: 138 pages / 424 KB
Blurb taken from Amazon:
“I had a phone call from my brother not long after I left you … he told
me that you had ripped up the cheque, he had a lot to say about that,
along with a few other things, none of which I will bore you with…. Not a
smart move Miss Brown”
“And why is that Mr Dranias” she had bit back her eyes angry daggers
“Because
you forced my hand….I told you there was no way that I was letting you
get your greedy little hooks into my brother.. so welcome to my island”
Diona had looked at him, the confusion on her face so clear
“Wh…what do you mean” she stuttered
By
now Nikias Dranias had moved so close to her that there was only about a
foot between them, and she could see his dark eyes as they looked down
on her with triumph on his face
“I mean Miss Brown that you will
be staying here, until you’re due to return back to the UK, when I
personally will put you back on the damn plane and out of our lives. My
brother, has a very short attentions span Miss Brown, and I’m sure that
once you are out of the way, he will quickly find other little
playmates with which to fill his day.
Diona had looked at him with shock, her eyes wide with disbelief
“You can’t do that “she cried out
He had smiled back his eyebrow lifting
“I think you will find I already have”
Mistaken
for her sister, Diona Brown had been tricked into visiting the island
home of the Billionaire Nikias Dranias, who planned on keeping her there
as his prisoner to stop his brother from marrying the woman he believed
to be no more than a gold digger.
However passion had quickly
flared between the two, and now Diona had found that she has to escape
to not only save her sister but also herself from the enigmatic and
distrustful Greek.
Oh. My. God.
DNF
I was able to choke down a sizable amount which enabled me to say: this is quite possibly
THE WORST book I've ever read.
Why, you ask? Just look at the blurb copied straight from Amazon. Do you see all the punctuation errors? News flash - it gets worse!
The writing is worthy of a grade school graduate. I'd say junior high, but I've corrected those students works whose writing exceeded that of Marie Kelly. The story is weak, the plot predictable, the characters fall flat.
With too many abominations to the English language, I decided the best course of action would be to quit reading before I ruined my eyes.
DNF
